![]() ‘The twin city of proud Ankh and pestilent Morpork, of which all the other cities of time and space are, as it were, mere reflections, has stood many assualts in its long and crowded history and has always risen to flourish again. Here, Pratchett describes Discworld’s city Ankh Morpork in the first book, The Colour of Magic (1983): Pratchett’s Discworld fantasy series uses a historian-like omniscient narrator. In Reedsy’s helpful post on omniscient narration, they discuss Sir Terry Pratchett’s use. Omniscient narration also lets you give a broader, objective slice of your world’s history. 2: Using omniscient narration to show readers your fictional world’s history ![]() While Celia thinks about the emotional, interpersonal effects of her actions, Dorothea focuses on her own ideals (‘purity’ and spiritual perfection) and whether or not she honours them. It shows both sisters’ feelings and deepens their characterization.Įliot shows us via omniscient narration how different the two sisters are. This isn’t the kind of ‘telling’ we should rewrite to show more, though. Dorothea too was unhappy questioning the purity of her own feeling and speech in the scene which had ended with that little explosion.’Įliot tells us directly that both sisters are unhappy. ‘Celia blushed, and was unhappy: she saw that she had offended her sister, and dared not say even anything pretty about the gift of the ornaments which she put back into the box and carried away. “I cannot tell to what level I may sink.” ‘Dorothea glanced quickly at her sister. “Perhaps,” she said, rather haughtily. “Shall you wear them in company?” said Celia, who was watching her with real curiosity as to what she would do. The elder sister tries ‘to justify her delight in the colors’ spiritually. Yet Dorothea refuses most of the items, except for a ring and bracelet. Using omniscient third person, Eliot contrasts Celia’s more materialistic nature with Dorothea’s pious, idealistic one.Ĭelia wants specific jewelry but kindly offers the items to Dorothea. In the chosen example, the two central characters, sisters Dorothea and Celia Brooke, divide their late mother’s jewelry. The book’s omniscient narration shows how to characterize well even without the immediate intimacy of first person POV. The classic novel Middlemarch (1872) by George Eliot is a good source of examples. So how do you use omniscient narration effectively? 1: Compare and contrast characters’ personalities using the omniscient narratorīecause the omniscient narrator is not an actor in the story, you may move between and contrast characters’ private feelings. An omniscient narrator can tell or show the reader what each character thinks and feels in a scene, freely, because she/he/it is not one of them. ![]() ![]() Omniscient narration differs from first person or ‘limited third person’ narration. It’s not only the oldest and the most widely used storytelling voice, it’s also the most versatile, flexible, and complex of the points of view-and probably, at this point, the most difficult for the writer.’ (p. But the voice of the narrator who knows the whole story, tells it because it is important, and is profoundly involved with all the characters, cannot be dismissed as old-fashioned or uncool. ‘Involved author is the most openly, obviously manipulative of the points of view. Ursula le Guin prefers to call the omniscient narrator the ‘involved author’ in Steering the Craft: The Gods of the ancient Greeks, for example, or the Gods of modern religions. There is a long tradition of deities in stories being ‘all-knowing’. The word ‘omniscient’ means ‘all-knowing’, from the latin omnia meaning ‘all’ and scientia, meaning ‘knowledge’.
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